As I lay next to you
I wonder if it's right
But maybe nothing's true
And I wait for my cue
Looking for the next fight
As I lay next to you
It is nothing to rue
I just want to understand
But maybe nothing's true
And it always comes anew
What will be the next demand
As I lay next to you
I have allowed so very few
The privilege of this invite
But maybe nothing's true
And then there's adieu
You take your faraway flight
As I lay next to you
But maybe nothing's true
A contest entry
- Dark: Villanelles ONLY. by bw43.
850 points, ended May 6, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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it sounds like the speaker has been lied to before and is scared to trust again. this was sad. thank you for your entry and good luck in my contest :D


