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Suffer the Children

Reverend Hale, preacher of God
Where has your innocence gone?
Burned with the witches or pressed with the stones
What has your religion wrought?

This was not the deed of your creator
But the doings of his great foe
Those little girls are nothing
But the tools of the Dark One

It's your job to stop them
Why you were called
To stop the true witches
The ones no one saw

They're not really girls
But demons in disguise
One by one they'll pay
For the innocence that died

"Thy Kingdom Come
Thy Will be Done"
He reads from the Holy dagger
And holds a Bible dripping blood





Author notes

My little addition to The Crucible. I always thought this was the way that it really ended.. Reverend Hale had hidden depths. ^_~

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  • XxMysticalFantasyxX
    April 29, 2007

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    Very well written..the imagery was great and it had a really great flow to it..thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest!