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Somewhere In Between

I just can't take it.
Everything's building up.
I want to let it out
But nothing seems to work.
Emotions are going hay wire.
Nothing really makes sense.
One minute I'm madly in love,
The next I loathe him.
Somewhere in between
I feel a mixture
Of sadness, hurt, sorrow,
And so many others
I cannot describe.
I want things to work out,
Truly I do.
Yet, I feel like,
I'm the only one.
Trying so hard
And it makes no difference.
What's a girl to do?

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im just very upset right now. i want things to be like they used to be but it just duznt seem to be happening.

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  • BeautifulDisaster9
    May 1, 2007

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    Amazing.

    I really, really liked this. I can relate so much to this poem. It's so true. In all honesty, you're right. What IS a girl to do?

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