I hate the dead,
For they've come to make me feel sick instead.
Their meloncholy stare
As they lay in the coffin
Stirs my soul
And churns my inards.
Death...so unfair.
The dead are whisked away to the distinct depths or heights
and take an eternity's flight.
One day they will come to us
But they have diminished into a forbidden night.
Their souls have gone away
And left us behind to stay.
Perish, Perish.
That's what this life amounts to.
One day, humanity will walk the path to night
And reach a great depth or height,
For the life today is but a fight...
A fight for joy or destruction.
A contest entry
- " PREWRITES ONLY" by wingsofgold25.
500 points, ended June 7, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you very much for your entry to the contest and the best of luck.
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i love this one indeed a poem that iam jelous of lol but do love it my fav part is "Perish, Perish.
That's what this life amounts to" i love that part you have talent i love it
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thank you very much::bows:: i luv your pic by the way. anyway, thank you very much for the comment!!
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just like the poem you showed me in lunch lol
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indeed, it is the poem from lunch, lol!
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Quite interesting. I liked the imagery to this and the emotions that ran with it. Nice job on this and keep up the good work. ~
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thank you whole heartedly for your wonderful comment!
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you're such a good poet jen. ^^ tehe. I loves this for it makes me think more about humanity and life then I'd normally do. It's great hun.
-Morning(Ame or Bobbie)
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glad you enjoyed it and thank you for your kind response. it's much apprecaited!
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