Every morning
I could not help staring
at the way the sun shone
in and lit the highlights
in your hair
and watched you breathe.
I traced the outline
of your lips in my mind
and once I touched your sleeve
and asked if you wanted
to see if we might find
a place to be together.
You smiled and we found a place
where I touched you,
and you touched me...
and our lips traced
the outline of our love.
Life has never been so good...
and I breathe you in and out
with happiness.
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A contest entry
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I like this, but i kinda asked for more unconventional, however the poem is sweet Good luck in my contest =]

