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Touch

Every morning
I could not help staring
at the way the sun shone
in and lit the highlights
in your hair
and watched you breathe.

I traced the outline
of your lips in my mind
and once I touched your sleeve
and asked if you wanted
to see if we might find
a place to be together.

You smiled and we found a place
where I touched you,
and you touched me...
and our lips traced
the outline of our love.
Life has never been so good...

and I breathe you in and out
with happiness.

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  • over the rainbow--x
    April 28, 2007

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    I like this, but i kinda asked for more unconventional, however the poem is sweet Good luck in my contest =]