Tadpoles
Slimy, dark green
Swimming, hiding, growing
Fun to catch them as they wiggle
Larva
Author notes
I am doing a project about frogs at school
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under Only ~ Form Poetry by Amunet Wolfbane.
525 points, ended May 19, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congratulations!!
YAY!!! You won a trophy my beautiful Princess!! I am so very proud of you!!!
Congratulations!!
All my love,
Mom 
xoxoxo
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Again I get to read this wonderful Cinquain :D I still think it is awesome :D
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thank you for the very nice comment! Im glad you think its awesome
Dewdrop
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Lol
this is a very well written cinquain got some nice images there and the syllable count is perfect - wonderful job!
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Thankyou for the realy nice comment
I won a trophy in my first contest. I am so happy
Dewdrop
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This is a very pretty write. It has beautiful imagery.
A well written Cinquain!
Harrisham Minhas
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Thank you for the realy nice comment
Nice to meet you
Dewdrop
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Great poem..Cinquain..impressive!!
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Oh, watch out while holding those slimy things not to drop
for they may go down your shirt ,,, flip flop. LOL
I enjoyed reading your poem. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for the realy nice comment and the luck. I won a trophy for this so the lucky wish worked
Thank you.
Dewdrop
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Awesomely Amazing!
This is a very good Cinquain you have written here.Thank you for sharing this with us and best of luck in the contest.
Don
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TY DON
For the nice comment. I like to write them cause I think there easy and fun! Glad you liked my poem.
Drewdrop
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Nice choice of words.
Very good job! Keep these poems coming!!
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TY I like to write them so I will keep writing! Glad you liked my poem
Dewdrop
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Great Cinquain !
You are just so great at writing these!
Good luck in the contest my adorable neice
This is a winner....
awwww frogs are cute
Aunt Lynda
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I like frogs too I think they are so cute TY for the nice comment Aunt Lynda
and the lucky wishes!
Dewdrop
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Brilliant! Very well done and I like the subject you've chosen here. Excellent form!
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Thank you for the very nice comment. I am learning about frogs in school and doing a project. I like frogs. They are cool. I have some tadpoles at home from my friends pond.
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Very cool! There used to be a lake behind where I lived as a child. We used to go over here and play and swim. We were always playing with the frogs and feeding the tadpoles. That's awesome you like them. And you know...frogs are good luck too
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I think frogs are really cool too. They are good luck but I dont kiss them.
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