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The Atheist

Wait! Ophelia!
Can I drown with you in the tulip filled pond?
Or, dear Madame Pontellier, could I steal
your trademarked swim?
When the seductive sea calls…

Setting sail might be a better solution.
To be the master commander in drag.
heh
To join Anne Bonny
and sing When I was a Maid
until our salty throats crackle.

Temptation might be too strong, though.
I would stare at the waves and
contemplate the unknown world below.
Which I, conspiratorily,
don’t believe exists.

Off the plank with me
so I can see how “wrong” I am,
yet I don’t think I’ll find any of
those other fish. Simply a deep and directionless


                                                              void.
How sad.

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  • MiZZ-AmAyA
    April 28, 2007
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    AGP, you are Amazing. Just wanted you to know.