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Fantasy world

To my friends,
My untold story of the angel

Untie the cable round my wings
Set me free and let me fly
Don't hold me down, I need to leave
My true home is in the sky

When I was four years old
I was taken from my nest
Put in a laboratory
Had to perform so many cruel tests

I had to run till I hurt
Yet that wasn't enough
You zapped me and forced me to continue
Yep, times were tough

I was starved and skinny
I was cut and torn
I had no hope, 24 hours a day
From dusk till dawn

I watched my father left to die
Witnessed my mother break down, and never rise
The pain and torture I am put through
My heart is full with demise.

Yet I push through another day
Lie down at night and cry myself to sleep
I was supposed to be a 'love angel'
And I silently start to weep

You have changed me
I have turned to the dark side
Yet know that you are my relief and shelter
You're my never failing guide.

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  • OurxBeginning
    April 28, 2007

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    This is really good. I love fantasy pieces, specially since it's creative and imagination runs wild. Great piece, loved it.~~