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how she is

We run away, we can't just stay away,

Like fingerprints that just don't help at all,

Proven guilty when I shall fall,

Saddened green eyes, I watch her slowly die,

They scared us then, when will this end,

Reddened eyes, she sadly dies,

Alone she always was,

Because yet when I tried to be there,

Yet I could not speak,

Sadly, I stayed quiet,

So suddenly weak,

Her spirit died today, but will rise tomorrow,

For now on..... she will never fear this horrid sorrow....

For I shall be there

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  • Haunted Doll
    April 29, 2007
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    welcome to ap

    very sweet, haunting, sad..i enjoyed it

  • OurxBeginning
    April 28, 2007

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    This is really touching and deep. I enjoyed reading this, a lot of emotion and I certainly felt it all. Nice work. ~~