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Save Me Tonight

I lie on the floor and search for emotion
While I'm contemplating your devotion

I think about your big brown eyes
And I can't seem to help buy cry

Screaming out your name, I look for you
Now there's only one thing left to do

One last gasp of air I take
You're standing at the door, it must be fake

Because I know you'd never be there
I'm slowly dying in my own despair

One more look, one final worldly sight
All because you aren't here to save me tonight

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The title i will prolly change... idk it just came out... any comments would rock my socks!

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  • PaiigeBARBIE
    July 29, 2007
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    oh my god, i almost cried! this reminds me so much of what happened to me


  • glamour guts
    July 11, 2007
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    Good rhyme.I like how every line carries great emotion.