The reds and golds
burn my flesh
and I do not feel
I will make it...
Burning, boiling,
confused of my surroundings,
I do not understand,
why this has happened to me...
Who threw the match,
and why?
In a list
A contest entry
- ~~~Underwater/Inside the fire~~~ by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended April 29, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Who threw the match and why??? That caught my attention!! It was seriously a beautiful write from inside there is so much emotions and from outside there is an impressive rawness!!
Great work!!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
preets
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i don't think anybody knows... this is so true, life is so brutal sometimes, but i guess you have to just stand up and keep moving, even if you are in flames... good luck
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the ending is great. "who threw the match, and why?". good luck in the contest! i love how you referred to the fire and reds and golds. and you were very descriptive in this piece. an excellent write you have here!
~bee
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