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Pond's Shore

Restless boat paddles
Dig small ruts in spongy mud
Hugging the pond's shore

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Written for the haiku contest, describing the boat on my pond.

A contest entry

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  • Candy6
    July 6, 2007
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    A good haiku.


  • Thorin-Ganush
    May 6, 2007

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    I like the alliteration of "hugging" and "spongy", Nice imagery. Great write.


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    April 28, 2007

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    "spongy mud"--i really like that. I'm not sure how I like "kissing" with the rest of your imagery though. Nice description. Good luck in the contest.