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whispered

you whisper in my ear,
the words i long to hear,
but do you realy mean what you say,
or are you just making me stay.

i love you more with everyday
yet some part of me is saying
you dont love me your just playing
but to me its not a game.

you hurt me once but
will you do it again?
i gave you a chance and you came back
you said you will not stray

now i see you and her
sitting under the tree
not even trying to hide from me
and you told me you loved me?

i loved you with all my heart
from your smooth lips,
to your light blue eyes
and your cute little smile.

my heart shattered,
and i cant find any one to mend it
help me please just tell me you love me
then everything will be back dear.

but somehow i know that
that time you whispered words to me
was you telling me not that you love me
but that you cant bare to let me go.

you know without me you are nothing
withought me you have no home
becuase the other girl is
she is still at home and you;
you took advantage of her

so now you made me lose
everything so dear to me
i feel as if i will never love again
thanks to you

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  • The-Poet--Of-Dreams
    July 20, 2007
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    emotional


  • Muffinlady
    May 4, 2007
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    wow... man.. i can't describe the effect of this..

    wowo..


  • LeaPan
    April 30, 2007
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    Wow.

  • The-Poet--Of-Dreams
    April 29, 2007
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    i love your peotry, this is nice and very emotional

  • OurxBeginning
    April 28, 2007

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    I loved this write. I can't really relate, but it was emotional and deep. Good luck to you in the contest. ~~

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