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Ice

Twisting, turning, winding, flowing.
The river breaks through the dam.
Kayakers try and control the tide.
But the fact is: it can't be controlled.
Breating free, independant, cold, warm.
The river is blue.
Ice Cold Blue.
The fish jump and swim throughout the river.
Boaters polluting the water.
The beautiful Ice Cold Blue.
Swimmers jump freely.
Not a care in the world.
But little do they know, the river is dying.
Dying of too much freedom.

Winter comes.
The river turns to ice.
Fishers searhc for fish in the Ice Cold Blue.
BUt do not suceed.
The River soon thaws.
The Ice Cold Blue is free.
Free to come and go.

Soon the river flows into the ocean.
Big fish jump out of the water.
Not so free anymore eh?

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  • OurxBeginning
    April 28, 2007

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    This is another good piece. Ice is really pretty, until it breaks, LoL. I enjoyed the imagery to this, creatively done. Keep up the good work. ~~