I see you there across the room
Laughing and joking with your friends
You turn your head towards me
And that feindish little smile crosses your face
A special smirk just for me
I love the way you smile at me
Just looking into your eyes
Turns my world completely upside down
The overwhelming love that takes over
I could almost fall down
And its always the same
I swear you take my breath away
And everytime our eyes meet
I know that we are doing something right
A contest entry
- Look Into Her Eyes by alta evans.
450 points, ended May 10, 2007, 17 entries
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Thats really something, hold on to that smile. Hope it stays that way
Great work.
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body language like how you've described is as much ESP, as knowing each other, yes indeed, I liked.
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tHIS IS A GREAT READ!!!*LOVE*
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I really loved this poem. I read it and it made me think of how I feel about my boyfriend. I write poems too, but I only have one on my page for now. This poem has inspired me a lot.
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this is a graet poem!
Lovely rhyme and flow.
i especially like the lines,
I could almost fall down
And its always the same
I swear you take my breath away
And everytime our eyes meet
I know that we are doing something right.
please return the favour, i would really appreciate it!
great job! -
good job, thanks for entering my contest
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