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Hey Girl

Hey girl with those pretty eyes,
Can't see all the worlds lies?
You can't forget and you'll never forgive
All the reasons you don't really live.

Hey girl sew your pretty mouth closed,
Never let the truth be exposed.
No one cares what you have to say.
Save it for another day.

Hey girl easy now, dry those tears,
Close your eyes, conceal your fears.
Hold your words, squeeze your heart,
Never let them rip you apart.

Hey girl open up your mind,
Can't you see your so damn blind?
Your world is crumbing in your hands -
Your fingers bleeding to hold the bands.

Hey girl time to wake up from your dreams,
No more fairytales, they all end in screams.
The day has darkened, turned to night,
Pick up your sword, it's time to fight.

Hey girl take your place at center stage
This chapter is over, turn the page.
Your hearts a lock, hand out the keys.
Let 'em leave you on your knees.

Hey girl step back from that mirror.
Can't you see realitys here?
You wern't born knowing to hate who you are,
The world decided to inflict that scar.

Hey girl, get your head out of the sky.
Forget your dreams you'll never fly.
Your paper wings have burnt to ashes.
Careful girls, conceal those gashes.

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  • The Hardest Goodbye
    April 29, 2007

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    10/10

    AMAZING. so full of truth and emotion. U are very much a good poem writer =) never stop I love it, i can't wait to read more of your poems =)


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    April 29, 2007

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    this is interesing, i mean this is like a kick in the nuts, but i think you did a great job on this, it is to the point, strong, kind of soul crashing, keep it flowing

  • OurxBeginning
    April 28, 2007

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    Wow, I too, love this! So emotional and so blunt. Powerful piece, and your rhyming is excellent. Well done on this and keep it up. ~ ~

  • BlackenedWhiteRose
    April 28, 2007
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    Wow...

    This is absolutely brilliant...i love it i love it i LOVE it!