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Chaos

I want to fuckin' beat your face in,
I want to break you nose,
You think I'm fuckin trippin',
Maybe I am, who knows.

I was fuckin' mixed up before,
Now it's beyond comprehension,
I feel like I'm out at sea with no fuckin shore,
The anchor's weight is no comparison.

I fuckin' trusted you,
I thought you accepted me,
I'm sick of your fuckin' wannabe virtue,
Just let me be.

But that'll never fuckin' happen I fear,
I'm afraid that you're just too closed-minded,
That feels like in my heart a fuckin' spear,
Your doubt in me goes down like acid.

You better get your fuckin' act together,
I wont wait too long,
To be fuckin' with someone better,
Despite knowin' that it's wrong.

Author notes

Originally written April 10th 2004. Had gotten back with the bf and he started his religion crap with me all over again (why we broke up in the first place).

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  • livestrong7
    April 30, 2007

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    i've been in a similar situation and i think that this was a really good write... check out my poems