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Escape from Reality

Thats exactly what I need
An epic escape from reality.
A place where only I can go.
A place to lose my sanity.

So here I am
On this 18th floor balcony
With the wind at my back
Afraid to comit the felony

The Dark Deed is coming fast
As I fall down to sleep
Hear the sound of a beating heart
And wake to a steady beep

What else can I do,
And still seem to live?
With fake eyes and small lies
And a broken heart I can't give

I sigh as I listen
To my heart's broken melody
It cryes for me
So I don't find the Nessity.

Author notes

I wrote this after me and my bf of 6 months broke up. Now I wonder why I wrote it b/c it dosen't explain how I felt then or now. But it sounded good and flowed well so I like it. Enjoy!

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  • OurxBeginning
    April 28, 2007

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    Awww, this is sad and I'm sorry that you're going through this. A lot of emotion and pain was portrayed. Nice job and keep it up. ~~