Your love for her is unbearable
She sees you as only the ground
She yearns for someone else
You sit at home, all alone
Waiting for her to come home
She's with someone else tonight
It hurts doesn't it?
Quite ironic, is what I find it.
Months ago, I was in your place
Watching you leave every night
You go out with some other woman.
My oh, my how the tables have turned.
Too bad, your luck has run out
Now you watch her as she leaves
You kiss her on the cheek
Knowing she's happy with someone else
You deserve to know how I felt
Every time you walked out on me
This burning desire to die
To be alone and to be not disturbed.
Say goodbye to your emotions,
As you see them slip away
I hope you realize this pain
A contest entry
- Give me a [ 2 ] heartbeat catastrophe {watching you love her} by CatastrophicSmile.
500 points, ended January 31, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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wow someones got a black heart...
whos this one about??
i really feel the emotions in this one....
keep it up...i like the dark side...lol
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