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My Trusted Love Story

You speak not to my ears,
But to my heart,
You sing to my soul,
You say you love me.
Please trust that I love you too.

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  • Liquid memories
    November 20, 2007
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    awwwww loved the flow here. success in the contest.

  • phoenixonfire
    May 1, 2007
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    This is so cute..so tender from its heart!! I really like that line Please trust I love you too!! Its like ur literally forcing your emotions out to express ur feelings!! There is a lot of simplicity in the work which is good!!

    thanks for entering and good luck!!
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