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Your Game

Time stops as she says those words
My heart has stopped beating
The fear is fleeting
My eyes are bleeding
Shes slashes my heart with a smile
Leave me bloody in a pile
Tears are too sad to arise
Was breaking my heart your prize?
I could stare endlessly into those eyes
Now i just want to die

Would you cry
If i would die
Express some feelings
You gutless bitch
It's like pulling stitches
From my head
But thats where you gun was pointing instead

You shattered my glass heart upon the floor
The shards, So sharp, Couldn't cut your skin
My face is melting through this pain
It's My Life
But Your Game

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  • nobodys-girl
    May 7, 2007

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    wow...this is so amazing it's not even funny. i've felt like this with so many guys in my life it hurts. no matter what it seemed like they just wanted to hurt me. awesome write.


  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    April 30, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    A strong poem filled with so much pain and some good imagery.

    Glad to have you here at AP and please feel free to contact me or any online Greeter if you need help here at AP.

    Let the ink flow and your fingers dance

    Rosemary


  • Childsight
    April 28, 2007

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    ah that is so heart wrenching! that is sssooo deep. but i guess some people would do that and they don't know the emotional scares that it leaves