I thought I'd be in a life with You, forever,
Where nothing, but how we felt for eachother would ever matter,
And our Love would grow stronger,
Through the good times, and the bad.
Problems shared.
Beyond all imagination we would be together, forver.
I felt all that for You.
But now I am lost.
And I can't face the truth.
I no longer understand how You could of ever meant, and felt ALL those things,
About me, about us.
And OUR LOVE.
How can you flick a switch to not caring.
When nothing ever appeared to go wrong, or even change between us.
You were perfect in our relationship, and seem to give me so much love, and then to this,
Nothingness that You seem to feel for me.
And now I can't get You out of my head,
And my heart.
It's better to of loved, and lost, than to have never loved before.
Debateable.
Please tell me what you think
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uh huh
spelling errors..... caps in unnessisary places..... you're mixing up some words, reread this out loud and see your errors, I get what you're saying though, it's a nice sentiment. though the writing could be better, remember, don't rush through your writing, take a while to make it awesome. You have great thoughts, best of luck.
return the favor,
HD
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Debatable indeed, I enjoyed this so very much..My favorite line is "How can you flick a switch to not caring" Great write ~Pastel
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