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Forbidden Dreams

Sweet temptation, forbidden dreams
Swirling about my empty head
Tantalizing, taunting
Coagulating impulses
Of feelings untold
Thrown into action.

Your hand brushes mine
Reassuring contact
Igniting a need
To lose myself
Within your grasp
Tempestuous heaven
A fusillade kiss
Of gratifying surrender.

Yes, it would be, a fusillade kiss
Destroying the ultimate bond--
A sacrilege of unity
Between husband and wife.

Cool wind impacts my face
Reality sinking in
I turn to go
You reach my hand
I shake off the threat
Your intoxicating touch.

Fleeing like a child,
Forbidden dreams
Roll down my cheeks
Like rain.

Author notes

contest note: it didn't really work out, but i felt the poem seemed to fit.

For some reason, I've been feeling like "blank verse" lately.

Any comments are appreciated

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  • Ignis Corpus
    July 8, 2007

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    Sweet temptation, forbidden dreams
    Swirling about my empty head
    Tantalizing, taunting
    Coagulating impulses
    Of feelings untold
    Thrown into action. good lines i loved them good job and good luck in the contes