Look around you and remember what you see
Don't forget the faces, the voices,
It's in your dream.
Whispers, screams and lies,
Ignore them, just follow your heart.
They don't let you follow the dove,
They say it's a forbidden love.
You see his arms waiting for your hug,
But you know you can't grab them and you know it's hard to survive.
Slowly your tears begin to fall,
You're just another lost,fragile doll.
His smile faded away.
He's so close, yet so far away.
"Remember the faces, the voices, it's all we can get
And you will always remember the day we met"
His mouth shout.
"My whispers, your screams and their lies,
That's the bitter reality we want to forget"
And they silently faded away.
Author notes
It's about a forbidden love even in dreams. I hope you like it.
A contest entry
- forbidden dreams by PurpleLogic.
315 points, ended April 28, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thought Provoking and so gorgeous...graceful and eloquent!!!
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Wow tihs is beautiful and amazing
keep it up.
Amber -
ah dreams of love, they conquer us at times, thankfully in dreams a lot are forgotten but some linger yes, a good poem
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A very thought provoking write. Well deserved gold trophy. Congratulations.
And thank you for our comments. I look forward to reading more of your writings
Mia
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Alsome
U did an amazing job with this poem full of words, soul and heart into this poem its very powerful piece and expresses alot I mean alot of emotions with this poem. Way to go sis u did a marvelous job loved the poem and loved readin it so how are u doing? I am doing good just enjoyin my break from school. well sis u take care hugs to ya and once again Amazin poem..
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How lovely, you won gold. Very well done. I like this a lot.
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exelent!!!!
this is realy good! i can feel the poem the words and i know what is going on!!! thank you for entering and good luck !!!
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Thank you.
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