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Reckless World

The world dances in wanton splendour,
caution flies with wings of carelessness.
Live for the moment, tomorrow may never come,
but what of misery I inflict on the way?

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  • Lj-
    April 30, 2007
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    I like the thoughts here. Smart.

    Thank you for your entry,
    Good luck.


  • Madhumita
    April 29, 2007

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    WOW!

    Amazing write....wonderfully expressed...blew my hats off! Great piece! Good Luck in the contest!

    Hugs...
    Madhumita

    ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 28, 2007

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    You've described your title perfectly in the first three lines. I'm afraid we look back too little, if at all.
    Ecologically and in so many other ways we live for today.


  • shuvi
    April 28, 2007

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    yeah! 4 amazing amazing lines! like each of them is a poem in itself... excellence at its best... true, sincere, and tugs at the heart-strings.. luvly! keep the pen rolling, luv and cheers, hugs and kisses, shuvi