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you are appreciated

Remember when you were a little girl
How beautiful the days were
Without a worry in the world
Cause you know mommy care

Remember when mom said
You could go out and play
Remember when you got on your bed and layed
She sang you a song and thought you to pray

Remember the sound of the rain
When you went to sleep
Remember your first love experience
That rushed blood through your vein
And made your heart leap

Remember Christ mass
The joy you felt
Think of time past
Whatever caused your heart to melt


Get a glance of how I feel
Just to have you as a (girlfriend?)
Girl tell me this is real!

But then again how can you understand?
This joy so unfathomable to humankind

Makes Stevey Wonder
Could my heart could my heart resist
If you where mind
Seeing you, while singing

"Isn’t she pretty"
"Isn’t she lovely"

Martha sweetie
Its you only
That shines so bright
That makes the sun seems dark
In the mist of the coldest winter ever
You bring a spark

Through the rain
Came you a shelter

Hated when I felt hated and hate
But loved you
Even when my heart was numbed
I felt you

Girl words cannot explain my gratitude
For everything about you that make me feel so good
I could continue forever
Fore this cause and more

Paper and ink could not hold it
If my heart would pour
Words could not explain so much words what for
Mon amour
Ce parceque J’tadhore

"I cold never pay you back
  but my plan
is to show you that I understand"

"you are appreciated"

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  • blondone
    May 2, 2007
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    please put your user name in the authors comment

  • blondone
    April 29, 2007
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    nice writing I just need you to follow the rules and your in there