im going to explain what's going
on in my head
lay it all on paper
[just for you babe]
[just for you ]
see writing is my thing so it might
come out more clear
this way...
im twisting and turning
all these words
that we've said
running them over & over
[in]side my head...
what i can't seem to
comprehend
is how we got here
so fast...
its like im racing to you
from light years away
.and it seemed okay.
im a patient
kinda girl
{only when i want to be}
and sweetie
i think id be able to sit
and wait for you all day...
but don't take me for
granted
cuz im not a
[Crash.doll]
baby
that you can just play
&throw away
if you wanted
id be here
to stay.
cuz;;
darling
you're a different kind of guy...
not my usual
//pretty.boy.whore//
you stimulate
my mind
&&i enjoy it
see this is where it gets
messy
.but ill work it through.
i don;t want to steal you from your
girl...well i do but i won't
if shes what makes
you smile at night...
if shes the one you
love to hold...
~don't let go~
||baby||
Everyone wants someone
to love
& if shes your girl
id gladly
push my feelings aside...
i like seeing you smile
but if theres
even a hint of
doubt...
you know where to go and
who'll show
you everything youve
ever wanted,,
and everything youve
ever dreamed
im just the girl who can give you
the world
and
more... if that what you need
now
don't
think
that
this
is to
try
&
sway
your
mind
i want
real
feelings
not
forced
emotions
i can
handle a lot
but.fake.thoughts
&Empty.words.
i just wanted to let you know
what ive been thinking
&&if this "Proves it"
then it was
simplier
than
I
thought
because if its truth that you want
i can guarentee
i won't lie
++im not that kinda girl++
.you.should know...
i speak my mind
all i ask is how you feel
i need to know
before
these
feelings
turn
.R.E.A.L.
and don't worry
if the answers No
cuz
boy;;i tend to grow on people
and
i won't be going anywhere
i would rather be a friend
than nothing at all
cuz;;
im just that kinda girl.
<3
Author notes
boy that breaks my heart everytime he smiles
and i just want him to hold me longer than a little while because baby;;you told me you were a heartbreaker...
[but i didn't want to believe you..]
&&&it hurts to feel this way
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- † Letters From the Heart † by OurxBeginning.
380 points, ended May 1, 2007, 18 entries
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" its like im racing to you
from light years away
.and it seemed okay.
im a patient
kinda girl
{only when i want to be}"
Aww hunnie bunnie;;
I love this because it's so obvious that
you mean every word of it.
I'm sorry he broke your heart but;;
that's a good excuse to break his face =]]]
I love you baby<3
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I'd rather keep him as a friend than forget him completely ... I feel for my situation. I know what you mean, for sure though. I sometimes think I can be better for someone than this other "girl" they have ... they never seem to treat them the way they deserve to be treated, eh?
"but don't take me for... - ...&throw away"
--this kind of hits me on a personal level. I feel if I give it another shot he'll just keep doing it over and over and I'll be used. -
"i want
real
feelings
not
forced
emotions"
" i need to know
before
these
feelings
turn
.R.E.A.L."
This boy better see what he's missing out on if he says no.
you're wonderful crash bb.
mhmmm. ♥
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actually;;
he must not see what you see
cuz now he's being really akward even though we've [you know] and he told me he likes me...but maybe it's too much (heart on my sleeve) shit. you know??
bbbbaby i adore you.
♥
[crash.doll]
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Aww, this is cute. I'm not a huge fan of the dirtypretty cliche thing, but, yours wasn't cliche, so thanks for that. The emotion in this was raw, and I could tell it was from the heart. I liked this line the most: "and sweetie
i think id be able to sit
and wait for you all day..."
I think anyone that loves someone would sit and wait all day. Cute piece, thanks for entering and good luck. ~
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thank you;;
im not into the cliched dirrtypretty scene
just the original style.
very much aprreciated your comment.
thanks
♥
-alexsis
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fuck.
loved it.
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crash ♥ crash
mmmh thank you darling..
i adore you.
♥
-alexsis
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So... I pretty much love it.
The repetitive "I'm just that kinda girl" was awesome, and very effective.
I loved these:
" its like im racing to you
from light years away
.and it seemed okay.
im a patient
kinda girl
{only when i want to be}"
And these:
"and don't worry
if the answers No
cuz
boy;;i tend to grow on people"
Fan-fucking-tastic. && "eXtreme"
Good for you, getting everything off your chest, even if it took a lot of words.
Much love; many kisses.
-{Your} -Queen- Allura
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babe you are the best..
you're comments make me smile..
♥
-alexsis -
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I'm glad, sweets.
ღX♥Xღ
Allura
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and don't worry
if the answers No
cuz
boy;;i tend to grow on people
and
i won't be going anywhere
i would rather be a friend
than nothing at all
cuz;;
im just that kinda girl.
<3
sweetie;
this poem is so sweet
and this guy definately deserves you =]
♥
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hahahaha
actually he broke my heart;;so no he doesnt deserve me...but i wish i deserved him..
sweetie you make me giggle.
♥ you much
-alexsis
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