The sky was beautiful, when the rain went away.
Now a small rainbow appeared, brightening the sky.
Small clusters of clouds, all came this way.
If I looked up, it was miles away.
A small soft breeze, whistled against the green grass.
How long would this last? I wondered.
Many more storms and rainbows is all I ask.
Storms that ride the wind, all the land conquered.
Author notes
I love nature, its peaceful and all of the world happiness can come from the beauiful environment that is seen everyday.
A contest entry
- In Nature, The World Is One by Manda-Lou.
600 points, ended May 11, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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Short, but beautiful poem. I liked your use of illiteration. After rains, the sky is probably the most beautiful she gets. You did a good job getting it across. Good luck and thanks for entering.
Samantha

