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[ The sky was beautiful, when the rain went away. ]

The sky was beautiful, when the rain went away.

Now a small rainbow appeared, brightening the sky.

Small clusters of clouds, all came this way.

If I looked up, it was miles away.


A small soft breeze, whistled against the green grass.

How long would this last? I wondered.

Many more storms and rainbows is all I ask.

Storms that ride the wind, all the land conquered.

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I love nature, its peaceful and all of the world happiness can come from the beauiful environment that is seen everyday.

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  • Manda-Lou
    April 30, 2007

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    Short, but beautiful poem. I liked your use of illiteration. After rains, the sky is probably the most beautiful she gets. You did a good job getting it across. Good luck and thanks for entering. Samantha