Do you even care how bad you hurt me?
Do you even care about the person ive turned out to be?
Do you even care how much i loved you?
Do you even care when i sit here and say we're through?
Do you even care about all the tears you made me cry?
Do you even care about all the times i wanted to die?
Do you even care you ripped my life appart??
Do you evev care that you broke my fuckin heart?
this is a pretty predictable poem when it comes to the rhymes..but ya .. everyone gets lazy sometimes.. lol
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tis a good write
lots of power in the words i like it
keep it up


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Very well done.
Maybe, a lazy write, as you put it, none-the-less, you got your point across quite well.


