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I saw you today,
and lost the words to say.
My heartbeat,
lost its rythmatic beats.
The way your smile shines,
taking the breath, and all I call mine.
Feelings within me,
unravel, destined to be set free.
I reach to you, but you don't notice,
a woman who longs for your tender kiss.
Chains, interlock this soul you see,
afraid to speak of, what you mean to me.
How can I not tell you, the way that I feel,
that the feelings within my heart, are genuine and real.
I couldn't face you, but I sent you many signs,
Roses placed upon your truck, in the middle of the night.
Or the balloons I sent you, at your place of living,
Surely jest you would of guessed, by the remarks I had been giving.
A little flirtacious smile, a batting of the eyes,
Echoed the words I longed to say, as you passed me bye.
Sitting at the table, so handsome and so sweet,
Trying to find the courage, to allow my heart to speak.
AS I took your order, a smile upon my face,
Reaching for the menu, my heart begins to race.
Hands slowly connected, my hands begin to shake,
Knowing within my mind, the choice I had to make.
As I finished serving, placed his bill in front of him,
Said have a great night, with a mischivious grin.
His face became a bright red, as he looked again,
I think I really like you, and I don't know where to begin.
Here is my number, I'll be waiting for your call,
A glimpse of approval, on his face I saw.
Cheeks now flushed, I hung my head,
Clearing off the table, penned on a dollar were words in red..

I think I like you to, I will be outside,
You spoke of something, I myself tried to hide.
**tears** flowing, I looked out the window to see,
My car draped with roses, on the windshield written for me..

I think I like you, my numbers on my card,
I have been wanting to tell you, but its been kind of hard.
Fearing your answer, all my words were gone,
STuck within this chest of mine, was the rythmn of your hearts song..



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love is a funny thing and sometimes we fear the unknown, sometimes its just worth the chance,

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  • SoulWhispher
    April 29, 2007
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    Well done

    It shoud have been a gold, but I suppose a bronze will do, Love John


  • without the night
    April 28, 2007

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    wow i love it!!! im terrfied to say whats in my mind to this guy im falling 4 maybe i should try it...i wish i had guts!! grr!! Overall great job! _claps_


  • Paulies Cracker
    April 28, 2007
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    this is soo good thank you sooo much!!! i loved it!!!

  • Liquid memories
    April 28, 2007
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    Hahahaha, so neet,

    loved this and the way things unraveled. nice story and with love.


  • Lady Altheia
    April 27, 2007

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    Oh do take the chance. I am so happy and I am glad I did. Even if he doesn't feel the same way at least you told him and you can get it off your chest.

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