Wind blows my hair while my thoughts blow my mind.
I don't deserve this Earth, yet I live and breathe on this creation.
I don't deserve this beauty, and yet the same breeze touching my face,
Moves the trees, the soil, and the water in the mighty ocean.
Your love is what I see as I look to the skies,
And my breath forgets to breathe.
Oh, Lord, I am unworthy,
But this glory overwhelms me,
For You loved me enough to give me this.
This sight to see,
This sound of music to hear.
This life to live.
Wind blows my hair while my thoughts blow my mind.
This is Your creation, as am I.
Author notes
hope it's good! Written on 4-27, technically 28, at 12:16 AM PICTURE 7
A contest entry
- Picture Options by WarmHeartedGeisha.
425 points, ended May 9, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hope it's good enough for this contest :-D
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Wow...
Just Beautiful. You wrote a poem way more worthy of wining than what I entered. Great write! Never let the pen drop...
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thanks so much! I'm very glad somebody was so impressed by this poem! I'm glad you feel it's worthy to be in the contest :-D thanks again!
Monica <3
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Beautiful!! "Oh, Lord, I am unworthy,
But this glory overwhelms me,
For You loved me enough to give me this."
My favorite part! I feel like this every time I step outside! Especially this time of year. I feel so overwhelmed with God's glorious creation!!
Beautiful job my dear!!
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this glory overwhelms me stood out to me. i liked that part, because it reminded of the wae i feel when i look at a big waterfall or am in the woods and see something amazing in creation, such as a sunrise. what beautiful words
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