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It's Over

It was a life filled with dullness,
With misery, denial.
A life decreasing edgelessly,
The paint's gone missing.
It's over..

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  • going nowhere
    July 20, 2007
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    so final...
    and sad...
    alot said in a few words. well done.


  • BillyClyde
    May 11, 2007
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    Sad-but good!Filled with emotion!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 27, 2007

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    Very emotion driven and vivid piece of expression. Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.