Everything I felt, you said was wrong
For months you managed to string me along
I believed there was a chance for me
But you only wanted me to be what you see
There's nothing you taught me this time
I didn't know before I committed this crime
The one thing I learned from you
Is that you don't care about false and true
I may have let you humiliate me
Your words may have been able to desecrate me
I don't care how much you hate me
I won't let you invalidate me
You may find others to imitate me
You may try to provocate me
You can try to incriminate me
You still can't invalidate me
It won't happen again
This losing of my original sin
I don't want to be simple to see
I just want it to be simple to be
I care for the time we spent
I doubt what any of it really meant
Cause I can't see through your eyes
No matter how many time I try
I may have let you humiliate me
Your words may have been able to desecrate me
I don't care how much you hate me
I won't let you invalidate me
You may find others to imitate me
You may try to provocate me
You can try to incriminate me
You still can't invalidate me
I won't play the invalid this time
I may not follow reason, but I follow the rhyme
Movin to the rhythm
Of takin what I'm given
I won't let you complicate me
And you can no longer invalidate me
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a very strong peice. I like the flow it did strike me as a very good song.
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this is a very emotional piece.. well done on putting your emotions into a write that many can and do relate to... it shows you have the strength to move on and past the painful issues and become a better person
cheers
Jen
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You told a sad tale, and your choice of words were well placed.
Keep strong and goodluck to you and your writings.
Love and Light.
~Raven Tears~ -
awsome poem
i loved this its so awsome, great write.
great flow, almost started to sing wat i was reading.
i enjoyed reading this poem....wow, great piece
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