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Monty Mosh My Rocker Man

I have a friend
A walking dissaster
A real kind of
Live-life-to-the-fullest guy

He's been around
Here to Huston
He's been in bands
From Norway to B.C.

I've know scince I was eleven
He's my rocker buddy
I call him Monty Mosh
We mosh as much as posible

But when we do
I look really stupid
Becasue he's not there
He's my imagenary friend

So when you see me trip and fall
It's not becazsue I'm clumsy
It's Monty
He damn well friggin' pushed me


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Balistic Massacre

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  • Kevan
    May 1, 2007

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    LOL WOW KAITLIN! Haha, I didn't know who you were talking about and then you said "imaginary friend" haha, excellent!! lol, I seriously liked this and hope to see you in the next round! Good luck!
    ~Kevan~


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    April 29, 2007

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    A humorous take on life in the mosh pit. Of course you didn't fall. I'll leave those bruising encounters to you younger poets. Good luck in this contest.