Our hip bones collided
in the drunken midnight
Or maybe it was us who were utterly f.u.c.k.e.d up
Your ugly tattos looked so beautiful
against your pale skin
showing your mistakes of
sex filled nights
Kiss...
your lips are soft
and those sweet words you whisper
are merely sweet poison
with a bad aftertaste.
Can you feel our ♥'s beat faster?
((Darling it's nothing more than lust and cocaine))
and everyone thinks our chemistry is perfect.
We stumble and knock over trash...
cans of paint, synthetic parts, and ripped up fairy wings
We fall into the dirt
with stains now on our knees
and before the clock strikes 3' am
we're removing clothes
as fast as we can.
thrusting and banging hard
as we collide into the street gutters
shedding sweat, skin, and sin
my orgasms burst into translucent glitter
Author notes
I chose option number 2
hip bones
cocaine
fairy wings
chemistry
poison
trash
glitter
dirt
ugly
stunning
kiss
midnight
drunken
street gutters
tattos
orgasm
synthetic
lips
perfect ((without the ection))
A contest entry
- giiiive up babe && droown yourself in a.c.i.d [i lalalaloved you] by PaperChainHearts.
450 points, ended May 3, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ++[[ ♥ Dirty Pretty ♥ ]]++ by Atrophya.
600 points, ended May 25, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Writer's block has no power here.
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nicely done!! lol =]
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We fall into the dirt
with stains now on our knees
and before the clock strike 3' am
we're removing clothes
as fast as we can.
mmmmmmmmmm i lovelovelove this. its reallyy good. -
Can you feel our ♥'s beat faster?
((Darling it's nothing more than lust and cocaine))
and everyone thinks our chemistry is perfect.
We stumble and knock over trash...
cans of paint, synthetic parts, and ripped up fairy wings
FABULOUS! this is incredible...I really loved it! I'm bookmarking this one!
fantastic job bby...ily!
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♥
Xx
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We stumble and knock over trash...
cans of paint, synthetic parts, and ripped up fairy wings
Deffintly my fav lines!
We fall into the dirt
with stains now on our knees
and before the clock strike 3' am
we're removing clothes
as fast as we can.
LOVE IT DOLL!!!!
though the topic is cliche (not your fault everything is)
you present in such a lovely way, and you are such a great writer!!!
this piece is amazing!!!
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this is .beautiful.
the perfect image of -pure- lust, &&
just in general
a great dirty pretty write.
you are very talented, doll.
keep it up.
♥.x.♥
Can you feel our ♥'s beat faster?
((Darling it's nothing more than lust and cocaine))
and everyone thinks our chemistry is perfect.
^^^^^
my three favorite lines.
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Nice write!
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