"It's becoming
i
n
t
o
x
i
c
a
t
i
n
g..."
"Hun, what do you mean?"
-♥-
She sits alone on the bathroom floor,
"Shattered" peices of "mirror" lay upon the ground.
The distorted image portrayed in the reflection,
Show how much she was now truly "bound".
Bound to the constant addiction,
This overwhelming self-"contamination".
It's eating away at her[Like an addiction]
[She was never able to find perfection]
A "blade" leaves it's "kiss" upon her "flesh",
Slowly her body feels "numb".
Her mother laughs and her father yells,
[What the fuck have you become?]
She's beginning to fall from "grace",
What
A
Fucking
["Disgrace"]
Her mind is all over the place,
She's no longer got the same face.
This feelings become a "disease",
A mind-blowing self "intoxication".
You can't run away[It's always there]
It's a self made "infection".
Nobody else could [b.l.e.e.d] this "elegantly",
They couldn't [l.o.v.e] this disgracefully.
Couldn't [l.o.s.e] themselves this exquistively,
Nobody else could [d.i.e] this "delicately".
The "cocaine" "dreams" have subsided,
The "scars" shall nolonger be hidden.
The "kisses" have faded away,
The lies no longer forbidden.
-♥-
"Hun I'll help you through it.."
"It's
too
late
to
[s.a.v.e m.e]
now"
Author notes
4- Write me a dark poem about being a drug addict and/or alcoholic.
6- Write me a dark poem using the following Wordbank. Please use at least 10 of the following words and tell me which one you used please.
Worbank:
((19words uses))
"Shattered"
"mirror"
"bound"
"contamination"
"blade"
"kiss"
"flesh"
"numb"
"grace"
"Disgrace"
"disease"
"intoxication"
"infection"
"elegant/ly"
"delicate/ly"
"cocaine"
"dreams"
"scars"
"kisses"
A contest entry
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450 points, ended May 16, 2007, 45 entries
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Wow. I was amazed by this poem. It's incredible! I love it.
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this was a great poem..and i enjoyed reading this..your words were powerful, strong and emotional as well..i found myself relating to this poem as well..this was a great write..keep writitng your talented..thank you for entering my contest and good luck
~Chrissy~ -
Nobody else could [b.l.e.e.d] this "elegantly",
They couldn't [l.o.v.e] this disgracefully.
Couldn't [l.o.s.e] themselves this exquistively,
Nobody else could [d.i.e] this "delicately".
that part is brilliant. absolutely amazing. this whole poem is loverly.
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WOO! Spicken awesome Caz!!
So
Fucking
Amazing
I hope you win! lol Good luck, darlin'
Tommy xo
"She wants to go home. But nobody's home. That's where she lies .x/Broken Inside\x."
p.s. Sorry, no novel today!!
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