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Repentance

~I walk this lonely mile, this eerie mile.
Released from the prison, I called home.
I repented, only, to make it a bigger pile.
Then sent to the prison, where demons roam~

I repent for the sins I have committed,
Though, despite the way these chains are fitted,
It feels strange…
Maybe it’s not to late for my life to rearrange.
Although, to rearrange; I would have to change.
But to change, who I am,
Would be to change who I represent,
Though, that seems just a little too much…
Just to repent.

Walking that mile, I could see the light…
And even though those bulbs burned bright,
I felt good.
Though, I’m not sure that they understood.
Maybe I didn’t understand,
Then that means after all I had planned…
Things wouldn’t turn out the way I wanted,
Living this life would forever be haunted,
So I would have to look at all the bad times I spent,
Then turn them all around…
And repent.

I was at my destination; my mile had ended.
At this destination, I noticed the smiles had ended.
To believe, I thought this… would end more splendid.
I sat to the chair where my chains stayed tight,
Even though from this view, I could barely see light…
It felt right…
And on that night… I was asked for a few last words…
I thought about everything from cars to birds…
Then said these two words… “I’m sorry”
Electricity flowed through my veins, once they pulled the switch…
I thought of home when my body started to turn and twitch…
I thought of all of good I’ve done, and the good times I’ve spent…
It was a fair cost…
Just to repent.

~I walk this lonely mile, this eerie mile.
Released from the prison, I called home.
I repented, only, to make it a bigger pile.
Then sent to the prison, where demons roam~

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Comments

  • wowz ness...I really don't know what to say...that was just amazing...

    It was so vivid...and so...wowzness...
    It makes me wonder if that's what really went through all those people's minds when we did have the electric chair...
    That was just...awesome. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!


  • KewlKid365
    April 27, 2007
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    DAMN BOI

    Marcus I love the stuff you write its amazing especially this one its so deep I dunno =P


  • aliceramone
    April 27, 2007
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    a good write with great flow...electrifying...thanks for entering and good luck in the contest