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This Life

I'm missing something,
but I don't know what,
I feel like I am shut,
Shut up in this world,
so tight only things,
to comfort me are my,
tears and fright Living,
this life is like,
being stabbed by,
a knife I just can't,
take it anymore I,
wish that there was,
a door A new door,
in this empty dark hall,
I wish that some would call,
Call my name and save me,
from the evil within,
one and all!

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I dont know why I wrote this

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  • Dusty C
    April 27, 2007

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    Great job on this sweetie..I know that we all get kinda sad sometimes, and it reflects in our writing..But I love dark writes, and you did a wonderful job on this one..

    Dusty