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Spurned(Redondilla)

It's devestating to be spurned
By the one you love be ignored
Your hugs shunned, your kisses abhored
Your heart and soul forever burned.

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A contest entry

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  • Lj-
    April 30, 2007
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    Very easy to relate to. Clear.

    Thank you for entering,
    Best of luck.


  • Luciferschild
    April 28, 2007

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    a bit short, i think you couldve made it a bit more powerful, but i did like it, its hard to write well in 4 lines and you did it, good job