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Ballerina

Facing the mirror, hand resting on the rail

Toes pointed out, knees slowly bend

Stretching her free hand to the stars

She smiles - she knows she is ready . 

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  • Lj-
    April 30, 2007
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    Nice write. Creative subject.


    Thank you for entering,
    Best of luck.


  • debilynn gold member
    April 27, 2007

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    this is adorable! i love it! this is very descriptive imagery. thank you for sharing this! keep writing! God bless you always