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While I Was Basking

Streaming thoughts, flow like rapids
Naturally occurring, like Lake Placid
A purifying fire, burns like acid

While I was basking in the ‘idea-ocean’
Spectacular designs sought promotion
And to a higher call was my devotion

With breath-taking sunrises, in varied hue
Spine tingling sensations, as if on cue
The wonders of life, in full view

Scriptures in light that can’t be erased
Signs of Divine that people can trace
Opportunities to do good and join the race

A place beyond here…
A time pass now…
A promise of prosperity…
…from the Lord of endless charity.




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  • albymyheart gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    Just lying back and seeing what you see through your eyes...What a lovely moment and what a view to behold. Breath-taking sunrises, scriptures in light, a divine time of silence and appreciation of nature's splender.

    A beautiful write...alby


    • AsIThink gold member
      July 22, 2008
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      Wow...thanks so much. I nearly forgot about this one. More than 1 year ago or more. Thanks for knocking the dust off; for wiping the cobwebs away...lol. Your comments offer so much to me. I feel inspired again by you.