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Now your Gone

You were there for me
Now your gone

You held me when I needed it most
Now your gone

You gave me kisses before bed
Now your gone

I miss you
Now your gone

I still need you
Now your gone

You were my Grandmother, my only one
Now your gone

I was only 9 when you passed
Now your gone

I want your hugs, your kisses too
Now our gone

I'll never forget you
Now your gone

I love you forever
Now your gone

But your still in my heart

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About my Grandmother who has been gone for 6 years now

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  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    April 29, 2007
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    Thanks for the comment. Well thats how I decided to write it


  • Dark Whispers
    April 28, 2007

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    I think the reopition of the poem kind of slows it down, it's a little over bearing. but the poem was still really nice.