I'm thinking too dark the dearly departed considered garbage after a robin eggs blue which was me and my crew hit em up, birds flew away as the hotel I stay in calls me back looking for lost jelwery but I already took that and they won't see me again I refuse to come back
A contest entry
- Four AMAZING lines by Lj-.
335 points, ended May 6, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please don't tell me what you think. I wish I had more lines. I was about to really kill it.
Comments
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This is cool. All thoughts, stuck together.
I like it.
But you only have three lines of text, so you might want to separate some parts to make four and make it look less jumbled.
Thank you for entering,
Best of luck.

