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I stare into this dirty spoon, just so I can see my face... Am I a criminal?
The revolution going on in my heart was mirrored by their cries, the guillotine calls...
& yet I sit and think that maybe Im the only one truly conflicted,
though I obliviously march through the blood-shed around me, I want justice.
Author notes
I was inspired by the French Revolution, The Reign of terror
A contest entry
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justice!
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That's a really interesting subject and inspiration. Cool.
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this was really good. i love it.




