Hell fire burning in his gaze,
Leading into his mind,
Taking turns like a maze,
All just to unwind.
A contest entry
- Four AMAZING lines by Lj-.
335 points, ended May 6, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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mysterious
but good.
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Very interesting. Mysterious.
Thank you for entering,
Good luck. -
Ohh! I LIKE! Very much! Very deep. =)




