Blue Eyed Suicide
Lips so Cold
He was the executor
We were his death
He was the messenger
A god of love and ecstasy
An heroin punch
A touch
We were his delivery
Package , stamped , and shipped out
Dressed up in glitter
Tight tees
Short Skirts
With gloss
No class
We were his prized possession
We were his jewels
Never did we come home empty handed
We had a fist full of dollars
A head full of dreams
A body used up
Our eyes filled with tears
Blue Eyed Suicide
Our street corner king
I know I’m his object
But I want to be his queen
Kissing him would be so keen
But he’s the blue eyed suicide
A drug busts dream
He loves to miss use me
Abuse me
I need him with me here
He’s the suppler
I am his liar
I cover up my insides
Try to hide away the marks
With nothing more than a makeup compact
Covering up the pain
But ,it doesn’t matter if I’m black or blue
I’ll be missing you
I’m in love with you
People call me a fool
But, they are just jealous of you
To them your just my suicide
My blue eyed suicide
Author notes
This was suppose to be a small stab at dirtypretty but it probably isn't even close :0
But hope you like it anyways
A contest entry
- -x-Whore-x- by xxRainbowDawnxx.
550 points, ended June 20, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What a truth we often hate to admit exists... I don't know. Something you can both look at in shame and also understand as we all use people as some period of time in our lives. Thanks for your entry.
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that was good. i like the way you wrote it. great job !
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thanks
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wow!!!
i'm totally blown away by the imagery in this. it's incredible, i mean it. doesn't really seem dirtypretty, but believe me, that is NOT a bad thing.
(i'm so over that whole scene... no offense to anyone, but it's just not my thing.) anyway, AMAZING job!!!
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thanks. i was just trying to experiment. Its really not my kind of style anyway. i'm more into freewrites and rhyming.........usually a mixture of both. thanks for the comments
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pretty hip
so this is about someone fallin in love with their pimp? hmm..i can dig it. -
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haha thanks
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