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[ With those silly faces ]

With those silly faces
And each fake smile
I can't ever admit
That I'm just your favourite liar.

My life is as untrusting
As a stranger with a gun.
My words are as fake
As the artificial flavouring.

I'm pathetically in love
With all the wrong ones.
I have no real reason
For the tiny little cuts.

I'm a faker
I'm a liar.
But most of all,
Im my own miserable enemy.

There's no reason
For me to be so sad
To be so unreal
There's no real problem in my life.

I'm your overdramatic kid
The girl who cries fake tears
The girl who wants everything,
I have no real dilemma's

That's who I really am
But you wouldn't believe it.
You'd laugh in my face
And tell me to go away.

But now I'm not lying.

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Me!
Yea.. I think.
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  • Akarian silver member
    May 24, 2007

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    Wow, LOVE THIS! I know way to many people like that, and they do tend to piss me off when they go on and on about it...

    This piece is really deep, tells who you are in a poetetic manner with great flow and great images and similies! I swear I can spell...


  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    April 27, 2007

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    Good Job!

    I think you did a GREAT job!! You really are a wonderful poet. And just what we were looking for, you! Thank you for sharing who you really are. I'm glad to have gotten to know you at least a lil' better. So, great job, thank you for entering and good luck in my contest!
    -GP