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Gutteral Scream

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You make me cry a scream of pure hatred
Loathing spills from my mouth, gutteral sounds
but somewhere, from deep within the depths of me
My demon breathes in contentment

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  • Lj-
    April 29, 2007
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    I like this. The last line really ends it nicely.

    Thank you for entering,
    Best of luck.


  • Luciferschild
    April 28, 2007

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    loved this poem, you have effectively caught the anger and frustration in your 4 lines, looks like i have some very real competition!!! nonetheless this is a great poem


  • tara wilson gold member
    April 27, 2007
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    Whoa, this is very dark, heavy energy in this poem, I feel, this poem does feel like a scream!


  • Whoochi gold member
    April 27, 2007

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    OH absolutely! I can identify with this at the moment! That in itself is scary! Magnificently penned...Amazing!!!