Those who live a life of blissful gluttony
Reach the gates of heaven first,
But leave behind those loved to blame themselves
A contest entry
- Graffiti Grab by rufina caraid.
500 points, ended May 6, 2007, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie Craze [Extreme] (Gold-winning QUICKIE Prewrites wanted) by Tangled Angle.
300 points, ended July 29, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Good job.
Luv,
Candy
Contest Holder
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Mhm very true indeed. Congratulations on your gold, thank for entering my contest, and good luck to you.
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Wow, I can see such pain and anger in this piece. A beautiful portrayal of each and you definitly deserved the Gold trophy. This would be amazing graffitti, I'd love to spray this across my schools front wall.
Bandaid. -
Very intesting right! Thanks for entering my contest!
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Excellent
Very well expressed and thought out. Congratulations on the gold it was well deserved.
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Potent piece! This is quite powerful for just three lines. Intense and realistic. Congrats on the Gold!
~Lori
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Interesting piece to be certain, nice flow to it with a powerfully shrt message. Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e
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You paint a sad picture of someones destiny, and its true those who care are left bewildered. a deserving gold.
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Such sad overtones. I've seen the results of suicide and your last line speaks so much truth.This certainly is an entry to make one think deeply about the subject.
Thank You for this entry
Von
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lol give 'em a break - they're DEAD already! I guess they deserve it for their selfishness..
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Wow!!
Powerful piece penned Sweet One
Loved this one! Touches to the core...
Three lines Wow!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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