Before I really knew you
I could feel your pain
On the outside, you were sunny smiles
But inside, there was rain
Before I even saw your face
When you were just a voice
I knew I'd be compelled to save you
I really had no choice
And this odd connection seems so natural
Unlike anything I predicted
Author notes
Empathy. A weird connection with a newfound friend.
A contest entry
- Psychic by Thom Boulton.
450 points, ended April 28, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
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nice poem
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Thank you.
Compliments will get you everywhere. ^_^
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I love it...it's brilliant!!
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W00t
*happy dance*
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